(Here is my attempt to make sense of the Monte Stories chapters I’ve been free writing/drafting lately. I think I might have them in some kind of order now.)
1. Carlos Stories-forward ahead to Bruna and Lena talking to Manito about Carlos
2. Intro/Background-Monte and San Luis Valley
3. Carlos and Pifanio Work in South Fork-intro to Carlo’s work
3.4 Stampede
3.5 Felipa
3.55 Felipa and Carlo on babies
3.6 Pifanio
4. Carlos and Felipa-back in time Felipa regrets marrying Carlos
5. Delores-relationships before meets Pifanio
6. Carlos-walks in sleep
6.5 Carlos sees UFO
7. Pifanio’s Wife-Delores leaves him again and again
8. Pifanio and Felipa-forward in time after Pifanio sleeps with Felipa
8.5. Carlos at Doctor
8.6 Felipa and Carlos and Pifanio Clash over Baby
9. Phone Call to Lena-Carlos calls Lena asking her to take Felipa’s baby
10. Lena’s Trip Home-Lena picks up baby and Felipa flips out
11. Felipa to Huerfano and Haunts Lena and Bruna
12. Felipa and Pifanio Get Together